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I'll take all my
Anger, sadness, joy, appreciation, observation
The metaphysical, the ethereal
And put it onto here.
Write black ribbons onto white paper
And unravel the sphere
Of flowing thoughts and clashing voices
The crashing of waves and the foam of the sea.
I think poetry in the shower
Poetry in my sleep
Poetry before and after I make a leap
I think poetry when I watch people dying
And when I hear children sighing
Poetry when I watch a machine
All in those monochrome films in history.
Though I feel it, I still don't know the words
Forming in my mouth but not coming out
Like tears that haven't been formed
They exist mentally, but pyschically it has no form.
And so
I'll take this
Thought
And place it onto here
And if you stay very silent
You can hear the moving of gears
The heavenly spheres being the spark of electricity
Moving me, driving me into the ground
The silence resound.
And I'll take this
Emotion- this devastation, this reverberation
All that makes a human free
By liberating thoughts and imagery
Into poetry
And placing it on here.
©2004-2009 ~corpusvile
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Well, after a friend inspired me, I finally decided to submit some poetry. I've written tons of poems before, but I've considered breaking the ice and submit something on Deviant Art with this semi-recent poem titled "Poetry."

Enjoy.

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:iconfancydelic:
Wow...this is really cool! I havnt been enthusiastic for a random poem for a while...but this is really good!
:iconcorpusvile:
Wow, really? Thank you!!! :D

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+ "A word is dead when it is said, some say. I say it just begins to live that day." - Emily Dickinson
:iconallshadesofgrey:
I am glad you decided to share your poetry, I loved this (and identified with it too lol). Very beauitful and inspiring.

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And the meteorite is the source of the light,
And the meteor’s just what we see;
And the meteoroid’s a bone thrown from the void, that lies quiet in offering to thee.

~Joanna Newsom
:iconlordaltron:
I liked it

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"Telkin and me as warriors are free....But are bonds hold strong.....Until the final dawn...."
:iconcorpusvile:
Glad you did. :) Thanks for the fav.

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+ "A word is dead when it is said, some say. I say it just begins to live that day." - Emily Dickinson
:icont0mcruise:
good work .. I like it ...

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Dude, RUUUUNNN!!!
:iconcorpusvile:
Hey! Thanks! :dance:

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+ "A word is dead when it is said, some say. I say it just begins to live that day." - Emily Dickinson

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